My thesis : Eating a lot of sugary foods is worse for children than for adults.
If you see chocolate chip cookies and doughnuts that are covered with sugar, you surely feel fantastic and want to eat them. This is not a exceptional case for someone. Most people in the world like to eat sugary foods regardless of age or sex. Of the five flavors, sweet flavor is the flavor that everyone likes. However, it is not good to eat too much sweet foods for us. Especially, the sweet temptation of sugar is more dangerous for children than for adults. That is because they easily tend to lose their self-control and they can form a habit of craving sweet flavors in an early age. Eating sugary foods is surely worse for children than for adults.
1.attention grabber
As an attention grabber, I stated the case of enjoying sweet foods very specifically. Furthermore, I emphasized that craving sweet flavor is a common phenomenon.
2. Explains the topic
I all explained that eating sugary foods is worse for children than adults. Also, I suggested the general reasons why I think like that.
3.My thesis
My thesis is “Eating sugary foods is worse for children than for adults.” I think it is clear and an argument. With this topic, we can dispute whether eating sugary foods is worse for children or for adults.
If you see chocolate chip cookies and doughnuts that are covered with sugar, you surely feel fantastic and want to eat them. This is not a exceptional case for someone. Most people in the world like to eat sugary foods regardless of age or sex. Of the five flavors, sweet flavor is the flavor that everyone likes. However, it is not good to eat too much sweet foods for us. Especially, the sweet temptation of sugar is more dangerous for children than for adults. That is because they easily tend to lose their self-control and they can form a habit of craving sweet flavors in an early age. Eating sugary foods is surely worse for children than for adults.
1.attention grabber
As an attention grabber, I stated the case of enjoying sweet foods very specifically. Furthermore, I emphasized that craving sweet flavor is a common phenomenon.
2. Explains the topic
I all explained that eating sugary foods is worse for children than adults. Also, I suggested the general reasons why I think like that.
3.My thesis
My thesis is “Eating sugary foods is worse for children than for adults.” I think it is clear and an argument. With this topic, we can dispute whether eating sugary foods is worse for children or for adults.
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